@crowriver Yeah that's my reading of things as well. Still, if you don't try...
Did the Leith one, in the suggestions bit at the end I proposed that if they wanted to make a modest improvement they should get rid of the road widening at the bus stops, keep the buses in the main flow of traffic, and reallocate the extra space to the bus stop islands. I also suggested that if they were feeling radical, they could avoid the need for such minimum-width compromise designs by abandoning their rigid adherence to traffic flow at all costs and make the Seafield > Claremont > Duke St > Junction Streets > Commercial > Salamander path into a one-way ring loop, giving them plenty of room for to-standard cycle and pedestrian infra even at the narrow bits, and on the wider sections the possibility of more public realm or contraflow bus lanes so buses can shortcut the loop.
Hey, at least I know I'll have brought a bit of humour to the life of whichever poor intern they have trawling the responses at the absurdity of the council actually designing according to the supposed hierarchy :P
And to be fair, looking at it, the Burdiehouse designs don't look bad at all at first glance.